Writing Prompt: Please write a story about an alien landing at DGS. What is their experience here? (note, this unfinished story would be considered Advanced on homework. It is an end of third grade example)
Once upon a time an alien named Bob landed at the Denver Green School. Bob came from the planet Yonkle. Bob landed at the Denver Green School because he believes in being a changemaker and wanted to learn more about sustainability. Bob is a robot alien, kind of like Wal-e. He has the ability to walk and to run, but also wheel around. He landed during the Third Grade’s recess. Alreem was the first kid to notice that an alien was landing because she was laying on her back looking at clouds. She ran to tell her friend Sarah Albustany that an alien was landing. “AHHHH AN ALIEN” was all she could say. Jack heard Alreem while he was swinging and immediately (and safely) got off the swing to tell the other kids swinging. “ALIEN! ALIEN” Leo heard Jack screaming from the soccer field and stopped to stare. Leo thought it was the coolest thing he had ever seen. The UFO that landed hummed and spun as it landed on the field. The kids all gathered around, making sure to grab the teachers too. “Welcome to Third Grade” Ms. Yonkus said to Bob. Bob waved and said he was excited to learn from them. Ms. Detmer called “OLLIE, OLLIE OXEN FREE” and the third graders lined up. Chris and Jakius made sure that Bob lined up with them. Taking care to explain how to walk in the hallway.
Once upon a time an alien named Bob landed at the Denver Green School. Bob came from the planet Yonkle. Bob landed at the Denver Green School because he believes in being a changemaker and wanted to learn more about sustainability. Bob is a robot alien, kind of like Wal-e. He has the ability to walk and to run, but also wheel around. He landed during the Third Grade’s recess. Alreem was the first kid to notice that an alien was landing because she was laying on her back looking at clouds. She ran to tell her friend Sarah Albustany that an alien was landing. “AHHHH AN ALIEN” was all she could say. Jack heard Alreem while he was swinging and immediately (and safely) got off the swing to tell the other kids swinging. “ALIEN! ALIEN” Leo heard Jack screaming from the soccer field and stopped to stare. Leo thought it was the coolest thing he had ever seen. The UFO that landed hummed and spun as it landed on the field. The kids all gathered around, making sure to grab the teachers too. “Welcome to Third Grade” Ms. Yonkus said to Bob. Bob waved and said he was excited to learn from them. Ms. Detmer called “OLLIE, OLLIE OXEN FREE” and the third graders lined up. Chris and Jakius made sure that Bob lined up with them. Taking care to explain how to walk in the hallway.